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I wrote a little drabble for this year's [livejournal.com profile] hd_remix fest :)

Title: favicon Bite Your Tongue
Author: [livejournal.com profile] snowgall
Pairing: Draco/Harry
Rating: R
Word count: 405
Summary: How hard can it be to cast a silencing charm?
Remix of: Bite by [livejournal.com profile] oakstone730 (intended as a prequel)
Notes: Dear [livejournal.com profile] oakstone730, I'm a huge fan and was delighted to be able to write a remix for you! Please excuse the short word count as this was a last minute pinch-hit :) Thanks to [livejournal.com profile] vaysh for the quick beta, and to [livejournal.com profile] bixgirl1 for encouraging me to write again!

Addendum:
[livejournal.com profile] oakstone730 asked how I had found this drabble of hers which wasn't on her masterlist :)

A few years ago I was reading through [livejournal.com profile] faithwood's backlist and came across Never Have I Ever on AO3. Her A/N mentioned that it had been "written for the 1 word prompt Comment Fest for the prompt shots." So me being me, I kept a record of that fest and who had written for it and noted that I had enjoyed [livejournal.com profile] oakstone730's fic :)

So when I decided that she should get a remix for the 2017 [livejournal.com profile] hd_remix fest too (since she had so graciously pinch-hit for us) a drabble was just what I was looking for, and I knew just where to find one!


    Concrit is welcome for this. Seriously, this is only my second fic, and I really don't mind advice on how to write better. You can send me a PM or comment below, and so long as your comments are constructive my feelings won't be hurt at all. Oh, and if I got any British-isms wrong I definitely want to know! Using language right is really important to me, so please do tell me if something is off.

Date: 2017-05-28 04:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] khalulu.livejournal.com
And what a delightful drabble it is! Write on!

Very fun and lively writing, deftly done. I particularly enjoyed "and proceeded to pounce" and "He was busily gnawing away at Harry's neck while Harry was fruitlessly attempting to cast."

Yay you for not only modding but pinch-hitting for pinch-hitters!

Date: 2017-05-28 05:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] khalulu.livejournal.com
Oh, thanks!

This is great stuff for your second-ever fic! So I hope it gives you confidence to write and post more.

The bathtub drawing was very cute too!

Date: 2017-05-28 07:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bixgirl1.livejournal.com

I'm so gladthat anything I was able to do encouraged you to write more because I truly loved this fic; it was so charming and sweet and sexy and still (because I can't help myself from rereading it) makes me smile.


Andthank youagain for the artwork!!!!   I think I might have mentioned that it was choke-on-my-coffee fun.  I love, love, love it. ❤❤❤

Edited Date: 2017-05-28 07:49 pm (UTC)

Date: 2017-05-28 11:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] oakstone730.livejournal.com
That was the second story you've written? It was so good! And spot on with matching my style!!! I love, love, love that you're so organized that you pulled out Bite from the depths and brought it back to life! Thank you so much -- it truly was my pleasure to do the pinch-hit, I needed something to jump start my writing after months of doing nothing and that was the perfect cure. Off to write more!

Date: 2017-05-29 05:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cat-wolfe.livejournal.com
I loved it! The end was hilarious and had me laughing out loud. It was wonderfully written, with excellent dialogue and characterisation! Well done!

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