Fic: Bite Your Tongue, Draco/Harry, R

[snowgall]

I wrote a little drabble for this year's hd_remix fest :)

Title: Bite Your Tongue
Author: snowgall
Pairing: Draco/Harry
Rating: R
Word count: 405
Summary: How hard can it be to cast a silencing charm?
Remix of: Bite by oakstone730 (intended as a prequel)
Notes: Dear oakstone730, I'm a huge fan and was delighted to be able to write a remix for you! Please excuse the short word count as this was a last minute pinch-hit :) Thanks to vaysh for the quick beta, and to bixgirl1 for encouraging me to write again!

Addendum:
oakstone730 asked how I had found this drabble of hers which wasn't on her masterlist :)

A few years ago I was reading through faithwood's backlist and came across Never Have I Ever on AO3. Her A/N mentioned that it had been "written for the 1 word prompt Comment Fest for the prompt shots." So me being me, I kept a record of that fest and who had written for it and noted that I had enjoyed oakstone730's fic :)

So when I decided that she should get a remix for the 2017 hd_remix fest too (since she had so graciously pinch-hit for us) a drabble was just what I was looking for, and I knew just where to find one!

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Concrit is welcome for this. Seriously, this is only my second fic, and I really don't mind advice on how to write better. You can send me a PM or comment below, and so long as your comments are constructive my feelings won't be hurt at all. Oh, and if I got any British-isms wrong I definitely want to know! Using language right is really important to me, so please do tell me if something is off.

Comments

[khalulu]

And what a delightful drabble it is! Write on!

Very fun and lively writing, deftly done. I particularly enjoyed "and proceeded to pounce" and "He was busily gnawing away at Harry's neck while Harry was fruitlessly attempting to cast."

Yay you for not only modding but pinch-hitting for pinch-hitters!

[snowgall]

Thank you so much :) You're such a great wordsmith so these compliments really mean a lot to me ♥♥

Oakstone's drabble was perfect for remixing as it telegraphed perfectly what must have happened the night before, so it was pretty easy to go in and just follow that outline.

I was just really glad I was able to create something for her as a "thank-you" for pinch-hitting!

[khalulu]

Oh, thanks!

This is great stuff for your second-ever fic! So I hope it gives you confidence to write and post more.

The bathtub drawing was very cute too!

[bixgirl1.livejournal.com]

I'm so gladthat anything I was able to do encouraged you to write more because I truly loved this fic; it was so charming and sweet and sexy and still (because I can't help myself from rereading it) makes me smile.

Andthank youagain for the artwork!!!!   I think I might have mentioned that it was choke-on-my-coffee fun.  I love, love, love it. ❤❤❤

[snowgall]

You're very welcome for the artwork :) I wish I could have done a better job with it, but the boys just weren't cooperating!

Succeeding in getting you to choke on your coffee is just about the best response I could have hoped for ♥♥♥

[oakstone730.livejournal.com]

That was the second story you've written? It was so good! And spot on with matching my style!!! I love, love, love that you're so organized that you pulled out Bite from the depths and brought it back to life! Thank you so much -- it truly was my pleasure to do the pinch-hit, I needed something to jump start my writing after months of doing nothing and that was the perfect cure. Off to write more!

[snowgall]

♥♥♥♥♥

I'm SO happy you liked it! And so very thrilled that pinch-hitting for the fest has jump-started your writing again!

Wins all around :)

[cat-wolfe.livejournal.com]

I loved it! The end was hilarious and had me laughing out loud. It was wonderfully written, with excellent dialogue and characterisation! Well done!